Score: 9

"Pretty nice animation."

submission: Gordon

date: April 18, 2009

Yeah, I don't really know much about the political situation in Great Britain, and therefore, do not know why you would show Gordon Brown as such a negative character in this one, so I guess I can only comment on the actual animation here:

Animation: The animation quality in this one was very good, it looked pretty nice. Some parts where done with more detail, like the one with Nicola Sarkozi, but, yeah, they were all pretty good, overall. It would look better if you added some more detail to your drawings, but I guess that would'nt affect your ratings pretty much.

Audio: I liked the audio in this a lot, really. I liked the rithm and sound elements in this song. The lyrics of the song were'nt very original, but I must say, you've got a pretty good singing voice, if that was you singing. The audio was also well synched with the animation.

Storyline: Not much of a storyline here, but I did like the actions of the characters, like Barack Obama break dancing. I thought that was pretty funny.

Overall: A nice, little musical animation, involving a really nice and cathy song. It was pretty short, but I don't think thats much of an issue here. You could, of course, make your future stuff involve more content, but these short ones aren't bad either, as long as they're funny.

Thank you for offering yet another fine piece of entertainment here, and good luck on any future projects.

5/5, 9/10

Score: 9

"A very nice game."

submission: Portal Defenders

date: March 12, 2009

I didn't finish the entire game, but I still think it's a very good game. It was pretty easy, although it didn't get boring in any way. The artwork was simple, but good-looking. The gameplay in this was pretty simple and easy to handle. It's nice how the controls are all Dad'n'me style, which was pretty fun to play. I liked how the game was all Newgrounds themed, with the layout and all the opponents who are real Newgrounds users. And of course, the achievement system was a big motivation to play... It's nice how they're linked with the userpage, and made in to a stat.

Overall, it was a fun, addicting game with a nice layout, good sound effects and an easy gameplay.

Thank you for making this and good luck on any future projects.

Score: 9

"Nice idea. Pretty funny!"

submission: 2nd Annual Tank Awards

date: March 6, 2009

I was expecting different choices here, but ah well, it's said and it's final. It was quite funny at some places, the end especially. I actually thought this was a joke at one point, but ah, It's nice to make these ceremonies a bit humorous. This is Newgrounds, after all... I only think that submitting this to the Portal would result in less people actually watching it, than if it would be a front page post, but maybe I'm wrong. Congratulations to the winners, of course.

Overall, this was a very original way to put this. I liked the idea of making this like an official award ceremony, like the Oscar awards or something. Only those voice overs for the nominees were pretty bad, but yeah, overall, it was very nicely made, edited, acted, etc.

Score: 9

"Nice quality!"

submission: Blockhead: Episode 11

date: January 19, 2009

Your animation quality was awesome, the drawing stile is really nicely done. Once again you have proven to be very talented in drawing.

You've done the voices nicely too, it sometimes feels odd, how you can make such a voice, but yeah they were nice, they also had good recording quality.

But sadly, it wasn't really funny, overall. There was just a lot of stuff too random to be funny. Or maybe it just wasn't thought out well. So I'll have to join the popular opinion that, the setting was better like in the beginning of the series, when there were only two characters. I really laughed a lot when I saw those.

So it would be good if you could make the storyline more like the ones in the older episodes. But everything else was great, I like the new animation style and layout.

Good luck.

Score: 5

"Not Bad/Good."

submission: Read the Sign

date: December 18, 2008

Yeah, well basically every aspect of the movie was somewhere in between. That is expectable for a second flash.

Animation: Speaking about overall animation quality, it was basic, but good enough to make the scenes understandable. Basically, it's the animation style that non-talented people usually use. You could of worked more on the backgrounds, they were utterly boring and expressionless. And the framerate was rather choppy, too.

Audio: The least good part of them all. The only track was played in the beginning. It itself was rather bad too.
It would've definitely helped if, that one track, would've played through the entire movie. Sound effects would have also been a good addition.

Storyline: Nothing too original or creative here. A very simple chain of events which ultimately result in death. 'Warning' flashes deserve respect of course, that with the 'noble effort' and all, but I really think that this would've been a lot more effective if it would have had much better overall quality.

Overall: A decent effort, as I said, in between good and bad. You have much to improve, and I think that, with some more practice, your skill will greatly improve.
Good luck.

Score: 8

"quite helpful."

submission: Icon tutorial

date: December 18, 2008

This was pretty good for a tutorial. I could say that the idea would be for the noobs, cause making icons is a pretty simple thing to do. I've already posted a few in the Icon Helpers page, hope some of them will be used:). I use ImageReady CS2, I can basically do the same thing as with photoshop. Hope the quality isn't different, though.

Anyway, this was a basic, but pretty good and informative tutorial. Since it is a tutorial, I wont suggest on any improvements, cause I don't think that a tutorial would have a very big need of those.
Good luck.

Score: 8

"ah, hahah!"

submission: The iPhone Shuffle

date: December 13, 2008

We have another winner! This one wins because of the voice acting mostly. Animation was decent enough for a cover.
Your idea was pretty sweet for a parody. I liked the ''deep voice places'', like in the end- ''it's cheap. buy it.'', lol really nice dudes, keep these up!
G-luck.

Score: 10

"Magical..."

submission: Quickling

date: December 2, 2008

I really think that this is one of the best games on Newgrounds. Simply every aspect was perfectly made, man I really don't know how you were able make something this great in flash... It's just.. wow.

Your animation quality was perfect for a game like this, I really liked the animation style, the main character looked awesome, every other characters were animated perfectly, and I liked how the fairies glowed, it was really impressive. I loved all those visual effects you made and the backgrounds were really good, too.

The audio was a really big impression. It was awesome, very catchy, and of course it fitted the game perfectly. Your sound effects were a lot and really good, they fitted the scenes well, too.

The story line was really inspiring and original, too. I never lost the interest while playing. You thought it trough quite well, the main idea is very interesting.

Your gameplay was easily manageable, just like any platformer game. I liked the combos he can make while jumping. There weren't any bugs and that already tells about the amount of time you had to put into making this.

This game was, overall, very original, impressive, inspiring, addictive and just plain awesome. I've always knew you guys from Mofunzone are one of the best in making flash games. I was really impressed, speechless even!
Good luck.

Score: 6

"Hmm..."

submission: Ressurection

date: December 1, 2008

It wasn't very good, at any aspects, but it does make good base for a lot of improvements.

The animation quality looked pretty good, actually. You've managed to draw the elves(or whatever kind of race that was supposed to be) very good, even though it didnt have a lot of detail.
One problem was because of the frame rate- it was choppy in a lot of places.

Your choice of audio was pretty nice, it really fit the situation quite well. I liked the harp sounds a lot, it reminded me of an old DND/Fantasy game called ''Newerwinter Nights'', but I guess that's not too important. I read your author comments, so I know why this movie doesn't have any voices, but still- it would have helped if they had them. A lot.

And the storyline isn't really clear to me in this case. The cartoon itself was really short, and I couldn't understand, pretty much anything, that they said, because there weren't any voices. So... this part was sort of crappy.

Overall, a nice animation, that really got killed because of the lack of voicing.
You should still keep making these, improve your skill 'n stuff. You have quite the potential, really.
Good luck.

Score: 6

"Huh?"

submission: Panda Fight

date: November 30, 2008

Okay, it just seems weird, how this got such high recognition.

Animation quality was pretty bad, it would have really saved a lot, if you had drawn some backgrounds. It wasn't all that dramatic, though: it still looked good, it was really dynamic, and it wasn't choppy.

I did like your choice of audio, the rock fit the scenes very well. I don't know if this would've helped, but you could've put some voices for them, sword sounds and other sound effects.

As for the storyline, I don't think that there's a lot to say here. Just random fighting. It was still pretty entertaining, as fights always are.

Overall, it was too short. Could have had better animation quality and could have used some sound effects. But still a little entertaining.
Good luck.